The tragic loss of 317 miles of roads and 120 dispersed campsites in Moab should serve as a call to action for all of us, and if we don’t rally to make a difference, it is likely the losses that lie ahead may be even worse. We have always been more concerned with losses laid out in Alternative C, but Moab’s Decision was much closer to Alternative B. Future decisions will definitely address the recreation aspects of the routes, but becoming more important are the resource impacts of each trail. We need to shift our focus to comment on the routes you love by taking note of the Resource Impacts that BLM has determined for each route. I’ll provide a link where you can find the BLM Route Reports with this information below.
Once again this will be going out again and riding the trails and documenting your findings with substantive comments. We are working on a consolidated reporting tool to help draft your comments, but more on that later.
So What is a Substantive Comment? A substantive comment identifies an issue you have with the document, says why it’s a problem, and offers other factual and unbiased information for BLM (or Forest Service) to consider. Substantive comments must be answered by the BLM, nonsubstantive comments are ignored.
Here are some qualities of what makes a substantive comment:
- References document pages, chapters or sections and uses objective information.
- Uses facts to question the adequacy, accuracy, methodology, or assumptions of the analysis.
- Presents traditional or ecological knowledge.
- Proposes a reasonable new alternative or revision to the alternatives presented.
- Identifies a passage in the document that is unclear or wrong.
Here’s some tips for making a substantive comment:
- Include any knowledge, experience, or evidence as it relates to your observations and comments.
- Provide GPS readings or landmarks, if possible, when referring to specific locations
- Present new information
- Share issues relevant to the environmental analysis.
- Suggest alternatives to the proposed project and the reasons why they should be considered.
- Avoid comments like “I do (or don’t like this”
- Remember that identifical comments are treated as one comment, including form letters. If you use a form letter, paste your personal comments at the very beginning of the form letter to make them stand out. Changed comments in the body of a form letter are likely to be overlooked.
Here is a list of comments that are not deemed substantive and won’t be answered
- Stating that you want your comment recorded as “substantive.”
- Crafting an emotionally compelling story without facts
- Stating only that you agree or disagree with a policy, resource decision, analysis finding, or presented alternative.
- Asking vague or open-ended questions
- Commenting on unrelated projects.
Here’s a couple good examples of substantive comments (fictitious, for example only)
Route SS1024 (Route Report Page 60) is identified for closure in Alternative B.C. This is an important connector route as listed in the Report, and leads to many activities including camping. to enable a loop route, rather than only an in and out trail. In and Out trails are far less desirable for users and the extra traffic resulting on In and Out Roads causing more of the negative impacts identified in the Route Report.
Crosses Washes or within 100 meters of an intermittent stream are listed as Resource impacts, but travel in the desert almost always involves crossing multiple washes and intermittent streams, that is the natural drainage system of the desert. Why are these crossings more impactful than others? Please clarify the potential negative impacts associated with vehicles crossing dry washes or streams.
There are 8 Special Status Species listed in the report, but we observed none of these on our most recent trip. What mitigations have you considered to minimize these concerns; would seasonal closures minimize the impact on the species? Additionally, what mitigations have you considered for the PFYC Class 5 area of the trail? Can it be rerouted around the area of concern? Attached is a GPX file of the route we took, along with selected photos.
I disagree with closing Route SS1024 because it is the only way I have to access my private land.
Question? So What Should I Do?
- Select an Area that has routes that are marked on the map as targeted for closure in Alternative B. Write down the route numbers.
- Go to the BLM Route Report, for the Swell you can find it here. Just use the Search Bar on the webpage to find the Route Report for your trail, generally they will be about 4 pages long. Print it out, and try to understand what their resource concerns are. How do you determine what things mean in the Route Report? Google should be able to give you answers to abbreviations in the report. For example, I googled “What is PFYC Class 5?” and “What are abbreviation T E S T in BLM route reports for negative impacts” and it gave me all the answers.
- Schedule time to go out and run the trail. Take your route report. Look for areas or conditions mentioned in the Route Report. Take photos along the route, especially noting any possible resource impacts they may have cited and think about alternatives when you’re on the trail.
- When you get home, write your comments on the route. Be as specific as you can. 2 or 3 paragraphs on a route is an ideal length, include photos and gpx tracks. Videos are not recommended because of the large file size. If Archeological or Paleontology is listed, you won’t get a specific answer as to where that concern is located, but you can ask questions about possible mitigations around the concern such as rerouting the trail, informational signing, barriers to narrow trail to prevent stopping, etc. It is ok to mention how long you’ve been using the trail, with whom, etc, but this should be like the dessert to your meal, maybe delightful to you, but shouldn’t be the main course.
- Submit Your Comments if the comment period is open. We will give you more details on how to copy us on your comments, please stand by on this until we work out the details. If the comment period is not open, get them ready to submit right after your ride while it’s clear in your mind. Again, stay tuned for more information on this.
Summary When you look at the comments required for one route, it seems like a lot, but when put in the scope of things, it might take you 20-30 minutes to write a good comment. Compare that to the fun you had running the trail, the people you enjoyed the company of on the trail, the overnight camping you did, and being able to enjoy this trail for generations to come and I hope you’ll agree it’s a good investment of your time. Please do your research and get out there and help save our trails!